dance of the night sky
   William Radice's poem
WORDS   IMAGES   DANCES
 
I. In the beginning
A mind is a circle,
Expanding as thoughts go round and round.
  Blackness
The lonely Creator
Was all mind,
  A circle
Expanding as his thoughts went round and round,
Expanding, extending and then   A light
With the fire of his energy
Heating and swelling and then   Separate lights
With pin-points here there dotting in the vast black spaces of his mind –
Stars, planets, worlds, galaxies,
Forming in his thought then exploding into light,
The fire-dotted universe!
  Superimposition of the iconography of Brahma – his four faces, his black antelope-skin dress, his lotus seat, his chariot drawn by seven swans
All of it contained in the circle of his mind.   Lights and fires swirling around
[Music without words, expressing light and fire and the circle of the universe, then quietening down again]
 
II. The Seven Sages
Seven Sages placed like pillars and arches,
Holding up the roof of the universe -
Visvamitra, Jamadagni, Bharadvaja, Gautama, Atri, Vasishtha, Kasyapa
  Pillars and arches blending with the iconography of the Seven Sages – their separate names and identities
Keeping the balance of it
While
Round their stability flames licked,   Fires licking and sparking and swirling
Sparks flew
From comets and meteorites swooping and swirling
But never disturbing
Lights and fires swirling around
The Saptarishi, the Seven Sages peacefully dwelling in the north sky.   The seven stars of Ursa Major emerging strongly from space, other fires fading in the distance
 
III. The Marriage of the Seven Sages with the Seven Krittikas
You, Brahma, are alone,   The Seven Sages: their nobility and dignity
But why should we be alone?
There is heat and fire all around us,
Forming the planets,
Driving the life of the planets,
So why should we be alone?
You, Rishis, are alone,   The Seven Krittikas: their grace and beauty
But why should we be alone?
There was heat and fire in the making of us,
Moulding our beauty,
Driving our passion,
So why should we be alone?
I, Brahma, am alone,   Four-faced Brahma in his chariot drawn by seven swans
But why should you be alone?
Rishis and Krittikas,
I give you a mantra
To bring you together
To love one another:
A mantra of fire,
Fire of the ritual,
Fire of the sacrament,
  Rishis and Krittikas combining in the marriage ruitual   Marriage-dance to represent the Rishis and Krittikas walking round the sacred fire seven times
Fire of purity,
Fire of desire,
Growing and leaping and rising higher!
[Music without words to represent the emergence of Agni from the sacred marriage fire]
 
IV. Agni’s Desire

Agni am I,
God of fire,
But where have I come from?
Older than Brahma,

  Agni with his two faces, three legs, seven tongues, seven rays of light, etc., emerging from the fire of the marriage ritual
Once
Equal to Surya the Sun
And Indra the Thunderer
Yet
Now I also am
The energy of Brahma,
The power of his mantra,
The bond between Rishis and Krittikas,
Heat, sacrifice, purity,
Marriage, love, lust –
Who or what am I?
One
Buttery face for the sun,
Another for the earth,
Three legs,
Huge ravenous stomach –
Where or how do I stand?
Seven tongues
Flitting, flickering,
One word this way,
Another word that way,
What do I mean?
Sharp gold teeth,
Biting and snapping,
Wild black hair,
Lashing and slapping,
Seven
Rays of light from my body,   Agni roaming through the dark, star-studded sky
Each one homing,
Seeking, lusting –
How can I not,
Being so hot,
Grab them, get them,   The beauty of the Krittikas
Wives of the Saptarishi,
All
Seven,
One for each of my tongues,
Each of my arms,
Each
Ray from my body –
Oh! See them
Twined so delightfully
Round the pillars of the Saptarishi!
Why can I not
Prise them apart?
  The darkness of space transmuting into a forest; the Seven Sages transmuting into trees; the Krittikas transmuting into creepers entwined round the trees
Tall trees the Rishis,
Creepers the Krittikas,
Space of the universe
Dark as a forest –
Who or where am I?
I must get out of it,
Flee from the lure of it!
Agni am I,
Older than Brahma,
Once
Equal of Indra and Surya,
Fire of sacrifice,
Fire of purity
Fire whose lust and desire
I myself must burn, crush, devour!
[Music without words expressing Agni’s frenzied struggle to master himself; changing then to a languorous, sensuous rhythm as Svaha roams through the forest]
 
V. Svaha
You, Brahma, are alone,
But why should I, Svaha, be alone?
So lovely am I,
So desirous am I,
  The beauty of Svaha   Svaha’s dance of desire and seduction beginning and developing
So desirable am I,
So why
In this dark forest
Should I be alone?
A light, a fire is approaching –
Whose?
It moves nearer,
And I too will move nearer
To see who or what
Is weaving in and out
Of the dark trees.
Is he blind?
Is he not Agni?
Can he not see
How lovely,
How desirous,
How desirable I am –
[The accompanying music changes to Agni’s rhythm again]
The Krittikas,   Agni again: his confusion and torment
The Krittikas,
Seven fragrant creepers
Round the trunks of the Rishis –   The Rishis as trees
My seven tongues will slip between you,
My seven arms will prise and pull you,   The Krittikas as creepers
The seven rays from my body will heat you, melt you –
[Svaha’s music again, beginning to
combine wih Agni’s rhythm]
Heat me, seize me, melt me, please me –
I shall be what you want to see,
You shall see what you want me to be –
Each of the Krittikas, one by one,
Prise and peel them away from their husbands –
  Svaha transmuting into the creeper-like Krittikas   Her dance becomes more passionate as she turns herself into the creeper-like Krittikas.
I am them,
The dance expresses the union of Agni with six of the seven Krittikas in turn, culminating in the birth of Skanda.     They are me,
Buttery Agni,
Loving secretly,
Twining fierily,
Come to me, come to me –   At the climax of the dance, images of the six Krittikas are flashed on the screen in turn, with a relentless, pounding rhythm that implies both orgasm and labour pains as Skanda is born. The sequence stops suddenly with an image of six-headed Skanda (Karttikeya), the god of war.
[Music without words expressing the union of Agni with six of the seven Krittikas; ending climactically with the birth of Skanda]
 
VI. War Unleashed
[This section needs to have dramatically different music: maybe just anarchic explosions of drums and percussion as images are flashed of war and confusion and chaos. The words should be like explosions, with gaps in between the lines.]     Fragmented dance postures: each one frozen in a moment of torment expressed facially or with bodily contortions
BIRTH OF THE WAR-GOD SKANDA!   Bombing of Baghdad
WAR UNLEASHED EVERYWHERE
POISON AND HATE IN THE AIR
EVERY RULE IN THE UNIVERSE
TURNED INTO HORRIBLE REVERSE
MALES NOW FEMALE   Suicide bombers
FEMALES MALE
CHILDREN WITH GUNS   African child-soldiers
ADULTS LIKE CHILDREN
BLOOD BOMBS CHAOS
VIOLENCE DIVISION DIVORCE
EVEN THE SAPTARISHI
CASTING THE KRITTIKAS
OUT!
  Images of the Krittikas with lines slashed through them, cancelling them out
SIX OF THEM CRUELLY SUSPECTED
OF HAVING FALSELY
CONCEIVED AND CREATED
SIX-HEADED SKANDA
GOD OF WAR AND TERROR!   Frozen image of Skanda again
 
VII. Pain and Love in the Sky
[The violence and chaos of the previous section gives way to grief-stricken wails on the clarinet, subsiding to a quieter mood of desolate pathos]   The night sky
You, Brahma, are alone,
And we too are alone,
  Ursa Major, six of the seven stars now alone
Divided by war,
Our wives now so far.
Cold our tree-trunk bodies   Tree-images
With no flowering creepers around them;   Pillar images
Frail our pillars and arches
With no love to support them,
Alone in the cold dark –
You, Brahma, are alone,   The siz Pleiades
And we too are alone,
Banished by our husbands
Though we did no wrong.
We are none of us the mother
Of Skanda.
His mother was Svaha.
Selfish Svaha,
Deceitful Svaha.
O Agni, Agni,
When will you know who you are?
Fire of devotion,
Fire of the ritual,
Fire of the sacrament,
Fire of desire
That so misled you,
So seduced you,
That now we are alone!
Our husbands far!
Each one of them,
Each one of us
A lonely, single star!
[Tender music without words now leads into the love of Vasishtha and Arundhati]
Arundhati, Arundhati,
Always so true to me –
  Vasishtha: his loyalty and love   Arundhati’s dance of devotion
I know that you never
Deceived me ever,
No mother of Skanda
But always my lover –
A climbing creeper
Round me,
Embracing me,
Warming the life in me,
Turning my fire
Into living leaves of desire –
The pair of us here,
Double stars,
Sharing our rays of light.
Vasishtha, Vasishtha,
Always my husband and lover,
Others are alone,
  Arundhati: tree and creeper image again, enclosed in a circle
But not us –
We share our light,
We mingle our fire,
Fire of the ritual,
Fire of desire,
Too warm, too true
For Svaha to imitate –
My
Six sisters she copied,
Deceitfully attracted
Agni,
But she couldn’t copy
Me –
We are free,
Together still,
You and I,
    Reprise of the marriage dance in Section III
Double stars   The double stars Alcor and Mizar
In the night sky.


Copyright © William Radice

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